IELTS Writing 12: Discuss Both Views Essays — Giving Equal Weight

1. Introduction. Savolni paraphrase qiling + "ikki qarashni ko'rib chiqaman" + o'z pozitsiyangiz (tezis). Fikringiz kirishdayoq aniq bo'lsin.

2. Body 1 — birinchi qarash. Uni adolatli tushuntiring: nega ba'zilar shunday deb o'ylaydi? Dalil + misol. Bu qarashga siz qo'shilmasangiz ham, uni kuchli ko'rsating.

3. Body 2 — ikkinchi qarash. Xuddi shunday adolatli va batafsil. Teng vazn bering — bir tomonni ataylab zaif ko'rsatmang (strawman qilmang).

4. Conclusion. Ikki qarashni qisqacha eslatib, o'z fikringizni qayta va aniq ayting: qaysi tomon sizningcha kuchliroq.

Introduction: "There is an ongoing debate about whether a university degree or hands-on work experience offers the better path to career success. This essay will consider both views before arguing that, although a degree is valuable, practical experience is often more decisive."
Paraphrase + "both views" + aniq tezis (experience often more decisive).

Body 1 (degree view): "On the one hand, supporters of higher education argue that a degree provides deep theoretical knowledge and formal qualifications. Many professions, such as medicine and law, are closed to those without a relevant degree. University also develops critical thinking that employers value."

Body 2 (experience view): "On the other hand, others contend that hands-on experience teaches skills no lecture can. By working from an early age, individuals build professional networks and learn how real workplaces operate. A young entrepreneur, for example, may gain more from running a small business than from years of study."

Conclusion: "In conclusion, while both a degree and work experience have clear merits, I believe the most successful people combine the two, with real-world skills frequently making the greater difference."
Ikki qarash eslatildi + o'z fikri aniq (experience greater difference).